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From the pen of Navpreet Amole. Short Stories, random thoughts, random moments. These are my own writings in various mind sets and on diverse aspects. A place where criticism doesn’t have any value. This is a habitat of a free mind in a capitalistic biosphere. And I am an observer 'Where will evolution take me'? Navpreet A.

Thursday, August 04, 2005

Goodbye!.

She stood on the side of the ocean. Looking into it and tried to see her lost days, see her small hands holding her dolls. She looked at the waves coming towards her and disappearing into the sand before touching her toes, reminding her of her own wild mind, thinking of a million things and forgetting them before she could figure anything out of them. The crimson sun far away looked down at the ocean in which it was going to drown, she envied it since tomorrow it would come up again, unlike those days with the dolls. why she thought.


Ocean sang the songs, the ones she has been hearing all her life ... and always found a meaning out of those. People had told her laughingly that the sea doesnt sing, it roars, those sounds that the sea makes are just random splashes. How can one not hear these soft words. The so called reality was being imposed on her. But she hung on to the tunes and the stories she heard in those songs.

With her small dolls she had seen some dreams. She flew in those. In her dreams she talked and walked with flowers wherever she went. She spoke to everybody, hugged and kissed them. She knew her dolls actually lived in a world where everything is possible and everything should be done. She missed her dolls where are you my friends, I miss you.

From the side of the ocean, she held the beach sand in one hand, the past days in the other and little diamond tears in her black eyes. She was unable to hold the sand in her hand. She knew the harder she will try the faster the sand will fall off. She didnt want to think about the past days in the other. The idea had made her sad many times.

The reality She thought. The days of her past waited in her hand, waited to make a leave. May be with the wind or in the ocean. She held them and didn’t want them to go away.

The tear fell down.

While it was in the air, she saw her world and her dreams looking back at her in the tear.

It fell down on one of the waves.

She looked at it in surprise. What she saw almost killed her with amusement.

The tear didn’t fell in the ocean, the ocean fell back in the tear.

2 Comments:

  • At Friday, August 19, 2005 9:33:00 PM, Blogger Banjo said…

    Hmm...I completetly understand the emotion you're trying to convey..well done! But I feel like there's something missing..like you've not utilized your imagination completely...like you've compromised on the depth..why?!
    (forgive me for the public critisicm!)

     
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