The visions and The sounds
Rachel walked slowly in the door of the shop which read 'Montgomery Trading Co. Est. 1958' in red. Next to the door was a window with a few shelves and frames for eye opticals on them. Dusty and faded with the sunlight, the frames on the shelf gave the wrinkles to the old optician shop. She opened the door and stood there to be greeted. Where is the shopkeeper? she thought. She stepped in and felt the carpeted floor to find her way in the shop with her long plastic stick.
Rachel had not seen since she was five when she lost her eyesight completely without any reason that doctors could explain. Eventuallu she adapted and learned how to find her way. She was a good listener. I can listen my ways she had thought. Her ears were her best friend. She felt lucky that she was blind and not dumb and deaf How can they live.
The wall on the right side was having shelves having many frames of different sizes. She found the wall and like any other shop she located the shelves and started finding something she would wear. She touched almost every frame, but could not find the one she wanted. The shopkeeper was standing on the right side as she could hear him cleaning the shelves. “I want a rectangular frame, a little bigger than these ones here” she said loudly to get the shopkeeper’s attention. She heard the person standing right to her open a door and bring back something which was placed on the table loudly.
She moved towards the table and the shopkeeper held her hand and put the frame in her hand. A gentleman she thought. One by one he patiently handed her the frames. “Ah, I like this one”. She took her dark sunglasses off and while putting them on the table she dropped them. Oh no, I cannot afford that today. She was quick to place her stick against the table and bent down to find the fallen sunglasses. The shopkeeper, who was already there on his knees, placed the sunglasses in Rachel’s hand. “Thank you so much, … and thanks for the carpet as well”. She smiled and got up wondering how would he sound like.
“I think I like this one, what is the price?” She referred to the last frame she was shown.
The shopkeeper didn’t say anything.
“Sir?”
The shopkeeper held her hand and wrote ten dollars on Rachel’s arm.
Rachel stood there realizing that the shopkeeper was deaf and dumb.


6 Comments:
At Tuesday, June 07, 2005 3:24:00 PM,
sheel said…
people dont want other's problems.. they are fine with theirs. blind people can only be blind and will be happy like that.. they cope up to be like that and find hapiness in that, For them being blind is livable.. brilliantly described this one character of people. good work
At Tuesday, June 07, 2005 4:24:00 PM,
Aarthy said…
I agree with sheel. Mmm, it is interesting how we 'see' others, isn't it.. mmm. :) lovely story.
At Tuesday, June 07, 2005 7:49:00 PM,
raindrop said…
Very creative story. Quite a few things jump out at me.
1.her positive attitude towards her own handicap, doesnt want pity-by letting others know that she is blind
2.at te same time she feels a sense of pity towards those ppl who are deaf and dumb, ironically she meets one and realises they are quite capable of handling their own inadequacies--shop keeper!!
3.she says that she can listen her way!....one plc she cant listen her way is with a deaf and dumb person!
At Tuesday, June 07, 2005 11:35:00 PM,
Champ said…
hehe.... all of the above are correct....
what i am wondering is......
what if they start goin out and end becoming life partners, how ironic, unique and full of life relationship that would be. instead of finding eachothers faults, they would complete each other.... good story.... made me read three time..... reading is what i hate so u could imagine
At Friday, June 10, 2005 10:32:00 AM,
Auzzie said…
LOL.. nannu and nannu's imaginative theories :P
At Friday, February 16, 2007 1:15:00 AM,
Anonymous said…
Excellent, love it! » »
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